I need your opinion of my beta game

Help and Feedback Building Support
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this is the game, tell me what to improve and what to remove, try it

I accept any advice and criticism

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For some reason, after the terror gui disappears. I just keep spawning in mid-air, and falling off the map :thinking:.

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I think Enabling IgnoreGuiInset would make the Loading Screen Look Better, also maybe switching to a black instead of grey since the contrast makes the it pop more.

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add a spawn location because I just keep spawning in mid air

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Iā€™m going to do itā€¦

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you can enter now ā€¦
:3

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There is nothing to do, I donā€™t really see what the appeal of this game would be?

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thatā€™s the map, tell me your opinion of the map

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Itā€™s Decent. I would say use custom textures, not just roblox ones, add some lighting effects, and some more detailsā€¦

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If there is nothing to do in the game, then change the title of this topic to:

ā€œFeedback on my mapā€ instead of ā€œFeedback on my gameā€.

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Hey!
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Some of your parts are touching each other, giving it this ā€˜glitchyā€™ affect.
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There is a patch of grace under your building. Maybe fix that?
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You cannot walk through this door. Check your CanCollide for this part.

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You cannot walk through this door.
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Itā€™s a bit dark back here. Add some lighting to ā€˜spice it upā€™! Also, you tend to use the same material and color throughout the building. Add some variations here and there.
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Some of your blocks are like this. Size them appropriately, please.
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I found this floating in the water. I would suggest either moving it or deleting it.
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The terrain does not look right. I would suggest using the built-in Roblox Terrain.
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More random models that do not belong in this place.
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Your door proportions are off.
Fix some of these problems and I think it looks great! It would suit a home store or a cafĆ©. Also, donā€™t forget to add some life throughout your build. Some plants and flowers would really bring this to life!
Great work and continue to keep this up,
FallinqSnowFlake :upside_down_face:

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Hey I would recommend hiding your spawn plate, theres a number of ways you could do this;
~Cancollide = false, transparency = 0
~Width = .001, transparency = 0
~Remove decal, recolor/texture to fit in with surrounding boardwalk area.

This will make your game look more professional!
I would also recommend adding more detail to the building and to the inside but overall, a great start. I really enjoy the loading GUI.

Nice work.

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the map I did before yesterday, I have to fix several things