i need advice so i can make my burger place better. i only did exterior but tommorow i am planning interior. plz tell me your opinions
plz give me advice for the interior to thanks.
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It’s a good start! I really like the stone texture – gives it a vintage look. Detail on the door is nice too. Perhaps make your roof a little darker so the sign stands out more.
oh thanks for the feedback! i will try
I certainly believe that your awning - roof should require a more proper shape it seems to be uneven have you tried including objects on top of the building vents, air units ect.
On the fast food restaurant build, the roof seems a little to flat which looks strange with the 3D text standing on he end of the roof maybe include some support holding - keeping the Text in place. Lights that stick out give a better depth to the build (entrance lighting, plants, ect).
Just to note, the material you used placed onto the build looks alright but you should add a mixer of too types I’m assuming more materials will be added later down the line. Is the roof intentional? Looks good hope to see the interior design.
change the texture to Smooth Plastic, Plastic, Wood etc. to give it a more low-poly look, add outlines to the build itself, maybe add some black or yellow lines.
change the sign to ‘McDonalds’ together, rather than two words as well.
it looks like more like a house, try making the windows far bigger so there’s a better and visible view of the interior.
thank you for the feed back i am still trying to get use to gap fill.
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It’s a good start. I would suggest to add more to it.
I remember giving feedback to you recently.
A lot has changed and honestly, it looks much better.
I’d recommend doing a bit of a path on the front, just to give it some effect, and as @jordonh23 already mentioned, the roof may need a bit of work.
well i am going to add interior
Well hi out there you could change the wall texture as the current texture dosent seem appealing to me for a burger place
I think the texture is not that good. Also you might want to add support to that sign!
The dev forum has become extremely sugarcoated. Whenever building or trying to learn a skill if you do it wrong it should be pointed out so you can learn out of your errors and be a better developer, this is not good, it’s average for a beginner, everybody should be honest and actually give constructive criticism so he can be a better developer and grow better skills.
Regardless of that, there’s always room for improvement, I suggest you always try to look for reference (images of the building in real life off the internet, for example images of several MacDonalds so you can see how they’re built irl and how you could try to mock their style) Whenever you’re planning to simulate a building that exists in real life. This way you can have a perspective into what it should look like so it actually looks like a MacDonalds.
Nobody will be great at first, everyone improves overtime, and some honest advice is to go off with what you believe is good, don’t go by people’s standards, go by your own, while asking other users for advice is helpful sometimes, it can still blind you into what you think would make it look better.
Would like to see how this improves, good luck!
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