I want tips and tricks for improving at clothing making

Hello, I am quite new to making detailed clothing (This is my first one)
I’m not sure if this is the place to ask but I need advice on this hoodie i’ve made.
Its still a WIP (I’m going to shade the arms after)

I mainly want advice on the hood section but if you have advice for any other part of it its greatly appriciated!

You can go as critical as you want I won’t be offended, I just want to improve.