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If Fall or Die Get Kicked Of The Server! đź’Ą Obby - Roblox My game, comment and say what you think and also possible improvements

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Perhaps you could add additional ways for players to earn rewards that could benefit them on their runs, allow easier options such as the ability to rejoin to a check-point you was kicked from.

I understand the concept, but at the same time some people will find it too difficult.

You should also add a time trial and leaderboards for that for the real competitive players.

I also believe that the Premium room offers nothing other than aesthetics and am slightly irritated…

I couldn’t use my own character model, I don’t understand why you changed the StarterCharacter maybe just add a optional morph and a special one to the premium room.

Best of luck with your project!

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You should probably fix some typos and grammar errors in the game, title, and description.

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And what would be the correct name for my game? tell me one

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“If you fall or die you get kicked off the server!”

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“If Fall or Die Get Kicked Out Of The Game! :boom: Obby” Correct?

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That’s right

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“If Fall or Die Get Kicked Of The Server! :boom: Obby” Its wrong or right?

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That’s wrong, it’s:
“If You Fall or Die You Get Kicked Off The Server :boom: Obby”

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But it has to be “Off” or “Of” like “If fall or die get kicked out of the game” (and I’m Brazilian and I’m trying to understand)

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You can either use:
“If You Fall or Die You Get Kicked Off The Server” or “If You Fall or Die You Get Kicked Off Of The Server”

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but “if fall or die get kicked out of the game!” is better?

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That’s totally subjective
But I think the 3 options I provided sound better

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What is the best “If fall or die get kicked of the server” or “if fall or die get kicked out of the game”

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The second sounds way better

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but the second it is better to use “of” or “off”

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“Of” as “off” doesn’t go in that sentence

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The title is a bit too long and unmemorable for my liking, maybe try rephrasing by naming it a “One Life Obby”?

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I can’t change the name, but in your opinion is better “if fall or die get kicked from the server” or “if fall or die get kicked out of the game”?