I would like some feedback on these builds

Just check out the 3 Builds in there pls,it would take too many screenshots for one post,that’s why I do it like this.
The place is priv. now I got enough feedback for now.^^ I’il make a new post when I made more progress! ;D

Just found that error on my own,oof


Have a nice day! :innocent:

Nice and smooth. Keep up good work and good luck to future development.

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This work is amazing! I would suggest adding some Tweening or moving parts. Normally the sci-fi/ futuristic genre is associated with innovative technology and is supposed to be greater than the past.

Having moving parts and/or automated movements of some objects I can guarentee will fascinate people more than just stuff standing still.
Amazing Build! 10/10

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Yeah some really nice objects here, particularly like the security camera and console. I would make the light flick on and off on the servers. maybe make the cameras rotate, get some movement in there to make it all feel a bit more alive

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Well the whole thing will have a lot of animated parts later on ;D I m currently just getting the Build done.Thx for the Feedback

No problem! Keep me updated, I would love to see the final result of this build!

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they look amazing, keep up the good work

I also love the use of neon parts

Well,that’s good,the game’s literally called NEON,:joy:. I’m happy that u like it. :+1:

True, But I also like the small details on the cameras and stuff :rofl: :rofl:

Ye,I’ve become better over the last month in that stuff.
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wow, that’s an insane difference.

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I think the ‘electric logo’ should have some wedges and stuff like this:

Other than that, I think this build is splendid! It’s pretty nice to actually look at and the futuristic style was executed fairly well. There could be some color variation with shades of blue here and there. I think that could make it a bit more pleasing.

Thx for that Feedback! O,y’all couldn’t know that yet,but the lighting is also supposed to be an S for Science,for the Science-faction in the game ^^

I think you should make it look more like the letter S, it’s currently made in a way in which it looks like a lighting bolt.

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Ye,it’s just hard to make it look like an S and still have it look like lighting which stands for innovation.

Build looks sick! Everything in it looks really clean, good job!

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