IceCream Store Obby: My New Obby I Need Feedback For

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(NEW) Escape The Ice Cream Shop Obby!

You wanted a new obby to roblox? We got it! This is our First Obby To Basic Devs
Play Now!

  • I need some feedback on the general design of it

  • I appreciate your feedback.

  • Inspired By Escape The Ice Cream Shop Obby! By @NICKGAMES54

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Main Bugs

  • Visual Errors at the front door at spawn.
  • I know in Stage 20 and 21 when you die it tries to TP you back to the first stage.
  • Invisible ledge at the beginning of 20

Visual

  • Tip over sprinkle boxes to make it look like they have spilled.
  • Maybe change up the texture of the sprinkles for death pads. Ex. Melted ice-cream, ice-cream cones? Maybe ice cream condiments as well.

Gameplay

  • State 11 add more hazards
  • 14 more hazards
  • 15 Maybe a checkered pattern hazards

Overall its pretty great! The style looks good and not too overdone, and the teleport animation is nice.
-Sail

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The Guy sitting at the Ice Cream shop on Stage 1 has a leg shorter/longer than the other

The Door Opening could either have a large hitbox range or just be LocalScript(if its not already)
Maybe make it a tween for a nicer animation/look

Main problem is the things that kill you, like death parts are easily able to just spam jump on and never die. Stage 6/13 however works properly on that problem

Stage 18, you can just walk out of the mouth

I recommend adding this script in, StarterPlayerScripts, helps with speed hackers, but obviously name it something weird

local player = game.Players.LocalPlayer
local function walkSpeedChanged()
  player.Character.Humanoid.WalkSpeed = 16
end
player.Character.Humanoid.WalkSpeed.Changed:Connect(walkSpeedChanged)
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