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These are for my upcoming group, Nox’s Cookhouse.

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Pros:

  • The 1st background design is very pretty. The colors blend well nicely. The pose in it is not too bad, and it looks nice behind that text. The 3rd is great too. Very good colors, very good design. The pose is great with the all the designs, and it just looks perfect to me besides one key things and i’ll get to that later in cons.

  • I like the avatar behind the text. Could be easily identifiable, and it pops out from the background with the glow around it. One thing I will suggest is changing some accessories of it though as it’s all the same, adding variety normally makes stuff better than usual.

  • The logo is very good, easy to look at. I like the light to dark gradient on the text. The colors used are very good too. The logo pops out, which is always a good sign. You want your logo to pop out and tell everyone that you are what you are. The bottom of the logo that tells what place it is (e.g. training) is also great, it pops out and tells you what is it very clearly without any trouble.

Cons:

  • The recoloring on the text is pretty poor, I would suggest changing the hue of the text instead if you didn’t. (cause it just kinda looks like you used ms paint’s paint bucket tool on the text, no offense) If you did change the hue, and it just glitched out like that I’d heavily suggest fixing the raggedness.

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    (not very clean)
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  • I feel like this kind of design where it’s just text in front of a character is really really overused. It gets boring and repetitive seeing the same thing with a different font and colors sometimes. Maybe it’d be better if you removed the person and had the text in the middle. It’d be more unique and refreshing.

    If you wouldn’t like to do above, maybe change some of the accessories on the characters. Like I said, It looks kinda bland seeing the same one over and over.

  • The 2nd icon is my least favorite. Background design is a bit okay, the colors used don’t really blend that well on it, and it looks really compressed compared to the others. The pose is kinda boring and not that special, especially for it being the main one. The positon its in is also not that great, in all the other icons the character’s legs are cut off by about a third or a half, but this icon you can see its shoes. Which makes it look odd compared to the others. If you’re trying to have a bit of consistency, this isn’t the way to go.

Overall, it's flawed yet decent icons, but if those flaws are improved upon it could definitely pass for me.

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Thank you for your honesty!

The backgrounds are to change once we get our game done, then it’ll simply be a picture of the restaurant with a color overlay on top of it. The backgrounds are currently just stock images I found on google in a few seconds.

The text was supposed to be like shiny, thats why the little white parts are there

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The white stroke makes it look glitchy if you don’t know if its supposed to be shiny.

The 2nd icon is the first one I made, so the positioning of the character is a bit different to the other ones. The background is very low quality, but thats only temporary.

Thanks again!

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