Ignore This If You're Busy. I Just Need Some Opinions!

Hello developers, I hope you guys are doing well! I’m getting into modeling in Roblox, I want some of you to please review my makings. I would love to know your opinion, please by all means, be harsh on me!

Tools, etc-
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Maps that I have made for my team!
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And a little extra GFX stuff I can do! - Obviously it’s not good so I would probably set it aside.

Thank you for reading guys!!! All of you are awesome!!! Extra Question: Do you guys miss school?

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This is all nice. I could express a better opinion if I knew what these assets were for. However from what I see, they look good.

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These are maps for a Candy game!

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I’m usually not a fan of low-poly styles, but I think they look nice. My only comment is that I can’t quite tell what the second from the right in the first image is. I think it might be some sort of gun, but I thought it was a toothbrush at first glance lol

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“Consider removing the bottom text since asking how much should i price my builds is against the forum rules”

Aside from having nice assets, the thread doesn’t show any information on the game it represents i’m assuming this is some sort of candy simulator map, instead of just having small objects place more to make it more interesting and attractive i can see the map forms into a circle the only thing i see wrong is the lack of objects and placements.

The second map I can’t get a good look at what’s going on, it seems like the crystal in the middle are bright, making it hard to see include cracks crystals coming through the walls and other objects should be placed to make it more natural which shows the cave form in general.

I’d recommend, instead of having just chocolate bars, in the corner of the map. Include more it would look appealing to more of a variety of colour and shapes of candy. Maps do not need to be filled with a bunch of items, but it would help if you included a few more to give it that candy feel the bottom image is quite confusing do you mind clarifying?

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Looks really good, I really like the tools! And the candy aspect is nice :candy:.

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It’s a watergun lol, I forgot what I made it for though.

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These all look really nice, I love the gfx

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Looking neat. Only 2 assets that I think could use a bit more work. (this part may be a bit mean sorry but it’s my opinion). The red thing in the first image next do the chain saw could use a some more detail because I can’t really tell what it is. Same with the hammer next to the baseball bat. Although I can tell what that one is. Sorry.

Other than those 2 items, everything else is perfect for a candy styled game! I really like everything in the second image. Those tools look really good!

Other than what I said before, it’s perfect for a candy styled game, well done dude.

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Asking for price suggestions is not allowed. Personally I wouldn’t pay a whole lot for these because they’re fairly easy to make. I would add more detail to some of these like the jackhammer and what looks to be a sausage beside the golf club…
Your maps could be improved a little more. They feel empty and the second pic (overused neon)

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The modeling is nice but the tools don’t go with the bright maps.
You’ve gotten the map colors to look great together, though!
You could use more detail on the map.
So far, nice job!

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That red thing was a hotdog lol.

Jhhheeezzzz, I like this Candy Texture Theme and I would rate it 8/10 in my opinion.
If I was a user a recommended price are around 20 - 100 Robux (or more if time taken bare long)

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I know you weren’t allowed to sell things, but I didn’t know you couldn’t talk about what things can be priced, apologies!

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Adding onto my previous reply, one other thing I’ve noticed is the scale of the tools. It may be a stylistic thing, but it strikes me odd that what appears to be a sausage is nearly the length of a golf club, and longer than a jackhammer. I feel like I could more easily knock someone out with said sausage than with the hammer at the far left of the first image.

On a more positive note, I really like the third GFX image! It looks like something professional you’d see as a game icon on the front page imo.

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