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#1

I made this animation, but, it just doesn’t seem that good.

How would you rate this?

  • Very Good!
  • It’s decent!
  • It’ so good that I’d buy it
  • It’s bad and needs improvement ( Comment suggestion below please!0
  • Not the worst

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Basically, this is some dude slapping another dude

#2

you have the basic motions and poses down, great foundation! all you need to do is work on the polish!
since the animation looks a bit rigid, I would look at this video about the 12 principles of animation. it’s a good and effective starting point to tell you what good animation looks like
now I highlight that because it gives you a good basis to how you should judge your own animation, it doesn’t make you good at animation in general

but I’m sure you can apply these rules fairly quickly and refactor the animation to look a little bit better! study is important and I highly encourage you to go for that

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#3

it’s just 2 keyframes per bone, there’s nothing to rate

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#4

Put his legs into it, really, you just twisted his torso like he’s a robot.