(i don’t know if this is the right category, because it didn’t look like any other one fit the category so if its wrong please let me know.)
anyways,
so i made this tree in blender (which i don’t have much experience in, as i don’t 3d model)
and i’m wondering what i could do to improve it.
thanks
The tree looks nice and simple, it would look better if you made the wood part of it alot smaller.
Hi! You could rotate the upper pieces of the tree to so that the lines aren’t so symmetrical, then loop cut the trunk and misshape it a little bit. Then after that, select a few vertices from the upper part of the tree and raise them.
I would make the trunk smaller.
Try and resize the trunk, and whenever making a tree, try and give it some more detail with the leaves area as it, in all, will look so much better. I do not know the style of the tree but I would still recommend making the color scheme a bit more, realistic…? In all though, great work!
Your tree is a quite thick. I’d suggest decreasing the size of the trunk and increasing the amount of “leaves” if that makes sense.
I’d definitely make the trunk of the tree smaller, it’s too thick and doesn’t look that good in my opinion. Other than that it looks nice and simple, great job!
The tree looks very simple.
I’d recommend decreasing the size of the trunk. Also changing the color of the tree to a darker green would look nice. I’d also make the top 2 leafs of the tree a bit smaller, and also add another additional leaf. Some other details would be bending the trunk a bit and maybe the leaves, and also making it abit more nature
Other than that i’d give it a 5 out of 10. Great job and I hope to see some more improvements from you. Also, you are in the right category!
If this helps, here is a trees I modeled and you can see the clear detail and maybe it’ll help improve you’re tree.
- cadjonathan
The trunk looks a little to big I would make it smaller.
What I would do is make the trunk more detailed (more curves, a bit more into the ground, maybe raise the leaves a bit for a taller tree). And I would also bend the leaves a bit so they are not all in one direction. Overall its a great start!
Edit: You can also press CTRL + R in edit mode to add cuts!
