Honest feedback. I wouldn’t add more text to it and I chose different colours to give it extra colour. I chose different images to showcase the variety of things to experience in this race game.
I’m not looking to get to front page but I want this game to be a fun vibe.
It’s just not something I see a lot of people choosing to click on voluntarily. Of course, it’s not targetted at me, but from a perspective of a developer and someone who also creates ads I can say that you should:
Create different multiple ads, one for each target demographic. For example, one targeted at a younger audience (??-11), and one targetted at an older audience (12+). This is optional of course, but it really depends on what age group you’re trying to appeal to.
Use better fonts and colors. The basic Paint.NET fonts aren’t too appealing.
Add nicer “transition” PNGs between each picture, instead of adding a choppy cut. It’s hard to explain, but if you look at a professional example of an ad, you’ll know what I mean.
Just note that this is my opinion and what I’ve seen has worked for others in the past! Good luck!