Is This Obby Different Than Most Obbys?

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Hey, I recently made an obby that is somewhat like a story. I don’t what other levels to add to it because it only has 8. Can you please test out my game and tell me if it’s actually interesting and different than most obby’s.
https://www.roblox.com/games/4800309073/Power-OBBY?refPageId=5923ab62-e488-4e44-b3f2-1f07f10fa2bb

Log Script
while true do
wait(1)
for i= 1, 200 do
script.Parent.CFrame = script.Parent.CFrame * CFrame.new(0, 0, 0.3)
wait()
end
wait(1)
for i= 1, 500 do
script.Parent.CFrame = script.Parent.CFrame * CFrame.new(0, 0, -0.3)
wait()
end
end

Rotating Platform Script
while true do
script.Parent.CFrame=script.Parent.CFrame * CFrame.fromEulerAnglesXYZ(0.0,0.02,0.0) wait()
end

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2

The teleport door is slightly buggy, it is also annoying that when you go to walk and do the obby it just kills you.

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3

It’s a nice game with a good concept! However the first stages I wasn’t sure of where I needed to go, and what I had to do. You should add an NPC of yourself telling the players what to do!

Also instead of teleporting the player to a new game, maybe you could just make the obby the same place as the start of the house? You can lose some players by making them think it’s a dead game. Overall, great game, and I could see it becoming a highly visited game.

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4

Great concept, but it still needs some work in both building and the obby aspect.

  • Somethings just don’t look that great, for example, the shade of green on the trees is too bright and should be toned down some.
  • Trees are copy and pasted. Also serve no point?
  • I recommend setting the game to so you can chose between R6 and R15
  • Making it so it doesn’t teleport you to another game, rather you can walk out the door of your home.
  • Need clear indication on what some obstacles do, for example, some of the stairs kill you yet we can’t see the stairs that kill us. The road from the house, I didn’t know that one road would kill me and the other wouldn’t
  • The checkpoint markers are a little weird.
  • Too much open space, make the entire map curve some and have it so you can’t see the entire map.
  • Some parts lag, such as the spinning platform or floating logs. Might be a roblox issue?
  • Have it so when you stand on the logs, you move with it and you don’t have to press W constantly.
  • The house could use some detail as well as the inside because it looks kind of bare.
  • INVISIBLE KILLING STAIRS

Things I find great about this game

  • The choice of music suits this game well
  • The story aspect is interesting and the music compliments it.

My recommendation would be to look at other obby games and see how they do it. Get a play tester to test your obby to make sure it works, some would be willing to do it ;). This game has potential and you can really turn it into something great.

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