I've made a game where it just plays a cutscene

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I need some feedback on anything I should fix/do.
let me know what you think
im new so i dont really know what to say. but give me some feedback

https://www.roblox.com/games/7473342829/A-MAN-HAS-FALLEN-INTO-THE-RIVER-IN-LEGO-CITY

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I honestly don’t like it because your basically watching a lego advertisement and there’s nothing to do and the advertisement is also short. I suggest either expanding the game so there’s maybe decisions you have to make or things you have to do, or just stop developing the game. :neutral_face:

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Yeah.. thats kinda the point

its made to be short and no decisions its kinda just like a video.. if you dont like it then dont play it :confused:

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For what it is and what your trying to make it is honestly pretty funny. Though I think you should add a delay before it starts, so people can load in. Because as soon as I got in it was still loading and the guy was half invisible. Add a delay and it should be a good short cutscene

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Yeah I noticed that. imma try to fix that today im not really good at scripting I used a plugin for the camera stuff but I coded the kick script, and some stuff behind the scenes and i built a little of the map. Thanks for the feedback!!

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I just fixed it :slight_smile: thanks for the suggestion

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Do you not understand this? That is the whole point

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nothing besides the camera moves, maybe add the build feature for the helicopter, and make the helicopters move around and have player animations and stuff. otherwise, it just looks like a camera moving with some stagnant models

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Cool! I’ve been thinking of doing something like this!

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Codes Otaku Cutscene plugin tutorial update! - YouTube i used a wait() command to delay the start

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very good plotline 10/10 would recommend

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thanks man, I apreciate it alot