Library map showcase (feedback plz)

hi, a while back i made this map and would like to get some >> honest << feedback on it :]

here it is: library, lost to time - Roblox

i also took some screenshots if you’re too lazy to join, tho joining would make it easier to see all the details i added

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Looks pretty great. Do have to say, the general shape of the library resembles that of a church. Feels more like a church that was later turned into a library rather than an actual library. If that was your intent then cool, though i do feel like its a 50/50 for me. It looks both unique but also rather… off in a way. Im not sure how to quite explain that but it just does not feel “right”.

Also i believe the blue atmosphere hurts the interior of the library a lot. The sparse darker orange lights dont fit well with the blue atmosphere.

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This map looks VERY GOOD! The graphics and lighting make it extremely good! How long did it take to make this map? The style and theme of it is awesome, and unique for Roblox! Will you make more maps like this?

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Oh my god, this looks absolutely fantastic! The colors, lighting, and atmosphere are stunning. You’re really talented — amazing work! :slight_smile:

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sorry for the late response, but tysm for ur feedback!! and yes, my intention wasn’t to have it necessarily look like your typical library. whenever i build, i usually never use any references whatsoever since that’s how i prefer going at it, and imo this also helps with making whatever map im building look way more unique. so that’s probably why you may think it looks off. some people like it, some don’t. regardless, thanks again for ur feedback, much appreciated

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