Little Winter Showcase

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Hoho everybody! Merry 1st December not long until Christmas huh? :eyes:
Anyways, I have made this little winter showcase, critical opinions is highly suggested so I can improve in the future.

Also here is the game link so you can check it out. Winter Island [Showcase] - Roblox
Merry 1st December

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now thats what i call a masterpiece

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Give some snow on green leaves of tree

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I am not sure what you mean? The tree’s leaves are white.

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I believe he’s saying to make the leaves green then add snow on top of the trees.

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the trees feel a little bit repetitive, and the 3 rocks kinda make it a sad scene.

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Although this looks good, here are some things that could be improved:

  1. The neon skybox thing in the background makes it hard to see and it also ruins the build.

  2. The height of all the trees are the same along with most of the rotations. I would make more types of trees, make some bigger and some smaller, and rotate them around more. They are also very close to the edge of the terrain.

3. I would make a little bit of grassy bits on the tree visible like this tree I made.

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  1. There is little variety in the terrain and the models. Maybe a house with a chimney, a camp fire, a tree with lights on it, snow on rocks, etc. Look up “Christmas low poly” in google for inspiration.
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This is verey nice but there would be a few things to change:

  1. Maybe add some more detail like more meshes to add more to the scene.

  2. It is very empty.

  3. The mix of textures and colors are weird.

other wise it is nice!

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That is the problem. Trees are never so white. Put some green leave visible.

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