Hello, I just made 2 logos for training and im looking for feedback like: what to avoid using, what to fix, etc…
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The first one is my favourite. What would this look like with a thick white outline? The second one I can’t see the writing compared to the emblem behind too well so I’d outline or lighten up the text. Very good though! 
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The word, “mafia” in mafia town is illegible. I had to look close at it to read that. Other than that, it’s pretty good.
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It’s pretty nice, the word “mafia” in the 2nd one is hard to see. Had to look at it very closely to see the word.
The design concept is very nice, however the lack of contrast does not help when trying to read what the logo says, consider also resembling clip art within the logo to give it that extra feel.
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The Mafia part of this logo was really hard to read. I would recommend changing the font color because it took a few seconds before I could realize what it said.
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I would recommend changing the background color of the Mafia one to a lighter grey to see the “Mafia” easier.
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The colour for Mafia is the same as the background so you really have trouble reading it. Make the grey for the Mafia text lighter so it doesn’t blend in!
Perhaps try recolouring the Mafia text to red or something? Also not sure if it’s intentional but the resolution of the logos seems to be low.
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Logos look nice I like the first but the second is hard to read.
Mafia is hard to see you should make its a lighter grey just a little so everyone can see it.
Overall like the logo looks great.
Hope this help.