Looking for feedback on my first ad design

I’m not the best at art, and I needed to whip up a little prototype for an ad, so here it is

The ad is for a parkour style game on roblox. I am looking for feedback, and feel free to go very harsh, as I do not know much about ad design, and haven’t touched sponsors/ads at all. All I have done is a decent bit of research.

All constructive criticism and ideas would be appreciated!

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Wow, that’s a pretty good ad! I’m not an expert (or even close to one), but I think you could try changing the color of the sentence “AND PLENTY OF RAGE” to red or orange.
One question: What editor do you use?

One question: What editor do you use?

I used krita, it’s great.
It’s free, works for mac, windows, and even linux.
It’s more of a drawing software and is pretty complex, but wow is it great to get into the flow to use. I use it for almost everything art related in my development work nowadays.

but I think you could try changing the color of the sentence “AND PLENTY OF RAGE” to red or orange.

I’ll definitely do it! I’ll try to contrast that sentence a bit more form the other aspects of the ad but thanks!

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