The ad is for a parkour style game on roblox. I am looking for feedback, and feel free to go very harsh, as I do not know much about ad design, and haven’t touched sponsors/ads at all. All I have done is a decent bit of research.
All constructive criticism and ideas would be appreciated!
Wow, that’s a pretty good ad! I’m not an expert (or even close to one), but I think you could try changing the color of the sentence “AND PLENTY OF RAGE” to red or orange.
One question: What editor do you use?
I used krita, it’s great. It’s free, works for mac, windows, and even linux.
It’s more of a drawing software and is pretty complex, but wow is it great to get into the flow to use. I use it for almost everything art related in my development work nowadays.
but I think you could try changing the color of the sentence “AND PLENTY OF RAGE” to red or orange.
I’ll definitely do it! I’ll try to contrast that sentence a bit more form the other aspects of the ad but thanks!