Looking For Feedback On My First Game

Hi, I have just recently picked up Roblox development for fun and have finished my first real game. Its a very simple project but I want to know what I can improve. All feedback is helpful thank you.

Game Link: Slippery Parkour - Roblox

Hey, well done on getting your first game out!

I didn’t get to try the multiplayer out, so here’s a few thoughts on singleplayer.
• Set the character’s velocity to 0 once they respawn and make them upright (see clip where I get banished to the lobby).


• It would be cool to add some more decorations to the levels. Perhaps you could base a few levels off of a theme, like an icy cave or something?
• I think the ice and the lava use the same texture which looks a little odd.
• I’m assuming that the level choice is randomised. If so, I’d say stop the same level from appearing twice in the row (unless this is intentional).

Overall though, I enjoyed playing your game and I think the increasing walk speed mechanic is fun! What’s the highest level you’ve gotten to?

Thank you so much for the feedback, I have thought about the same one generating but put it on the backburner. I’ll work on that soon. Also the highest level I’ve been too was level 20 anything after and I just cant handle it.

Think about what separates your obby from every other obby out there. Is your obby something that you yourself enjoy playing? If not, maybe you should work on improving it so you find it fun and add in some cool mechanics.

Thanks this really got me thinking about what I could do add something new to my game. Im now making a self-freezing mechanic that can stop you to act like a safety net at high speeds and make things a little easier while also heavily punishing you for it in multiplayer.