I am looking for feedback on my Roblox game. Poolcore: Unique Aesthetic Poolrooms I am mostly asking how can I improve in future projects. Rate everything, lol
It’s not bad. I’m not an expert on the “poolrooms” but your game is pretty on par with the source material. The only real problems I noticed was the lack of variety in the rooms besides the lighting. And I don’t know if this is a poolrooms thing, but I don’t understand the holographic objects and seats. Also, try to let the player know that they will be teleported to another game when interacting with something.
You’re a pretty good builder! The only thing i’d say is to add more things to see/do in future builds. 
PS: The bookshelves in your cozy apartment are unanchored lol
Thank you for the feedback. Ig I understand what you mean by the lack of variety in the rooms and the confusion surrounding the holographic objects. The map was initially intended to be one room, but it felt too small, so I decided to add more similar rooms but to keep the map finite, as it is meant to be a hangout spot. The holographic effect is original but I can see that it might be confusing since other games use it to show locked items, the source material which did not have any decorations. There are better games that showcase poolcore better, as I attempted to mix it with other elements tho. I will definitely take this into consideration for future builds. I’ll also make sure to let players know when they will be teleported. The bookshelves are unanchored intentionally, lol
No problem! and I had no idea it was supposed to be intentional, I just noticed it and had flashbacks when stuff in my game would fly around because they were left unanchored haha!