Hey fellas, l’am Hmota1, an average builder and i built my second showcase some time ago.
I’ve been showing it to people who commision me to show that i do infact have a small amount of skill.
But i find myself often getting rejected.Your build looks great! It’s nice and detailed too. Maybe reduce the same material such as wood? Or use different colors.
Upon seeing this, I’ve noticed that the entire scene is incredibly desaturated with no visual cues to explain it; you can add a film grain or include rising ashes to achieve this effect. Another thing I would recommend you do is use Future lighting. Once you optimise the ambience, it helps a lot.
I’ve had EBR admins review my portfolio multiple times in the past.
Looks great! I love the concept. I would recommend messing around with the lighting. It might be more atmospheric if you made it darker inside the house (and maybe used the future lighting). Also it seems as if everything has some sort of bright white tint; It might be your ambient set to a brighter color. I would do without this so the colors look more vibrant.
