Looking for feedback on new WW1 GFX

Hello


I just finished working on my new WW1-era GFX/Thumbnail and would now appreciate some feedback! What do you think of it? What could be improved? Which version do you like more?

The GFX



Thank you for the feedback! :slightly_smiling_face:

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I feel like there’s too much blur, way too much going on the screen, and too much information to take in.

I’m not really sure what to focus on, and the text is not that visible and a bit too large.

Otherwise, it looks nice. :melting_face:

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The lower portion seems fine.
Albeit the only parts I find weird are the planes… they look like those models hanging from the ceiling i.e. they are static, which they shouldn’t really be. Also, it seems like their engines near their propellers are on fire, I can’t make it if it was actually intended to be like that.
All I want to say is, that some parts of the plane are way too reflective.
Great job overall!

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