Hi bartholamew, I played the game live on my Games Radar review stream after seeing your DevForum request. The guided text + lighthearted tone make the early stages welcoming, and the build ran smoothly for me. A couple quick wins: custom screenshots/thumbnails will dramatically improve click‑through, and I’d rethink the 5‑minute cage penalty—a shorter timeout (or interactive escape) could keep players from dropping out. Adding optional “challenge” routes might also extend retention beyond the first run.
My Scores: Gameplay 5/10 • Visuals 5/10 • Originality 3/10 • Polish 6/10.
You’ve got a friendly on‑ramp; a little UX love could turn this into a go‑to starter obby.
P.S. Found your game via Games Radar, my community effort to surface new, under‑the‑radar DevForum projects.