Quick information on my showcase so far: [Quick Note: All assets from this game are 100% created by me in Blender and ROBLOX Studio.]
I am currently working on a scenic showcase that focuses the player on a calm and nice path directed to an old and abandoned sword in a stone. I am currently not looking for the bland reply of “There’s not much there.”, because I am looking for more feedback regarding the detail of the scene. (Focusing on what’s there and not what isn’t currently). Game Link:
Looks super good right now. I would make it force first person. Add a river path maybe so people can walk around, add a forest next to the river path. But nice job
Edit: Id edit the tree where it doesn’t look reflective and so smooth
Also I’d push up the rock to hide the sword a little more
Overall, I like the starting point of the showcase it kinda reminds me of that one blender project made by (ForgottenWorld).
I think the showcase looks decent at the start if this is going to be in a forest maybe some trees and grass around the stone blocks would help improve the overall design of it.
Since the build is still in progress, maybe have some vegetation connected to the rock or some plants surrounding it just to have more of an natural environment feel. Other than that it’s pretty good I look forward to seeing the final result in the future.
Looks great. I’d suggest changing the time of the lighting so it creates a better vibe. Also, add more rocks? Theres not a whole lot to judge but if you added different styles of trees/stuff to see it’d be even better. Rocks remind me of skyrim for some reason. Good job
We can just wonder off in your first game, you could maybe make the terrain higher and inaccesible to the ends and also limit a bit our 3rd person viewing(im bad at english)
That is primarily because it is unfinished, when the game is completely finished I will make the map blocked off in some areas. Right now, I am just focusing on the details.
