So I’m making a jump type simulator and I’m curious to see how people feel about the overall layout of the game. Is it too cluttered? Too unorganized? Let me know please! I’m open for constructive criticism 
I plan to add so much more to the islands + planets.
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Any more pics than that? Won’t lie, I can’t say much with seeing things only on the bottom of everything.
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Sorry I just got off my computer. But I can link you the game if you wanna see it in person!
https://www.roblox.com/games/4266367568/JUPITER-Jump-Simulator-BETA
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Um i think its pretty cool but, I think you should have different shaped clouds and also diferent clouds for each level. And maybe different things you can jump on. But it looks pretty good. : )
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Thanks for your input! I’ll take it into consideration. <3
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I think there may be too many clouds because when I look up my frame rate drops down to 20-30. Also make the GUIs a bit smaller since it gets overlayed by chat.
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Thanks for taking the time to check it out. I will get right on that!
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So far, you have a clear directive: to create a simulator game. Right now, however, this is far in early development at the moment. Are you asking for a review, or just seeking improvements on the whole game?. I am not a fan of the layout of the clouds as they look pretty cluttered and pretty close I would try adding other types of islands or different objects in the sky for players to jump so I’ll state my opinion. This game seems to have some potential in my opinion.
At the moment the game is pretty empty as there seems to be not a lot going on here I would advise adding and creating other types of buildings or possibly fill the map so it could look less empty, but I think if you continue adding and fixing the game, it can get more fun as it goes on. Obviously, there are some parts of the map that lack emotions try improving the main island to have a more welcoming feel to it the buildings that don’t really represent anything. It is completely unfinished insofar that the map is for to empty and the clouds itself, are too close to other objects.
However, I do feel like it’s still in development. Moreover, I would try changing the layout up a bit at the moment it looks like you just threw a bunch of clouds in the sky try creating other types of islands so they won’t look bland. Perhaps use different objects and have a variety of shapes. It’s a good start, but needs some refining.
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I appreciate it so much man! Thanks for the insight. I’ll definitely be improving this game as much as I can now. This information was much needed.
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You definitely need some more variety in the cloud shapes and sizes. I can’t really see the rest of the map, so I can’t really judge that much. Good luck with the game!
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You have created a main idea for the game, but it was executed poorly. The designs of the GUIs are neat and well done, its just the building. It seems like you didn’t put much care into building, and just slapped something together. I would maybe take time with your building, and make it appealing to others. Here are some things you can do to execute my point perfectly.
1. Remove some of the clouds, there are WAY too many of them, making it look crowed.
2. Work on a Town Square area where the players first spawn, since that is what the they will first see in the game, giving them an idea on what this game will look like.
3. Add some more nature to the game (Trees, bushes, grass, etc). Nature honestly makes the game much more appealing and a sense of effort that was put into the game.
That’s all I think you should worry about for now. Good luck on this, it has so much potential! 
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Thanks a lot man. I really needed this advice. 
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Anytime, I love helping others with my own passion! 
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One other thing, totally off topic, Im working on the background for my main menu, make sure to stay tuned for that.
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Awesome dude I’m really looking forward to it!