Looking For Someone To Test My games And Tell Me Problems About Them

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I Have Recently Been Getting Bad Reviews On A Obby of Mine, But Idk Whats The Problem, So Im Looking For Someone To Test All My Upcoming Games Including The Obby, And Tell Me What Needs Fixing

https://www.roblox.com/games/4282602087/Escape-The-Candy-Store-Obby-REVAMPED?refPageId=d5e5fd7b-6780-44ac-b93c-4f7dae5c422b#!/about

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This belongs in #collaboration:recruitment

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This belongs in #collaboration:recruitment. However, I am interested in this position!

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Awesome ty guys, for letting me know

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I would love to test the game.

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Hey, I’m interested for testing! Discord tag: MystiqueArts#1686

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Hey, I’m interested in testing this game if you still need it, hmu here or on Discord, Furret#4638

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Hello,

I played your game and I thought that for the most part it was fine, but here are some things I noticed:

  • You should try and keep everything in one game. Teleporting to three different games was disorienting, and it eliminates the point of playing together with friends.
  • Alongside it being in multiple games, the winning game is by itself. There is no “prize”. Most obbies end with being able to get a path and go see others, being able to fly around the map and even possibly help others. Being alone in the winning game eliminates that point.
  • The death animation was awkward. It took a tad too long to respawn and sometimes it glitched you out, spawning on some random part of the map. I’d suggest finding a script that respawns the player instantly, or teleports them to the checkpoint.
  • In the second game, where you teleport to, all of a sudden you now have a gui pop in your face when you hit a checkpoint. This was not in the first section. Keeping it the same is important.
  • Your levels were very repetitive. I noticed most, if not all the levels were purely jumps across lava. You could spice things up a bit by making them walk on a bridge, having to dodge moving candies, having to jump from a height onto a smaller platform, and more.
  • Your story was lacking. In the beginning you had your “guide” telling you to watch out. After the very beginning, I don’t believe we saw the candy man anymore. Nowhere did we phone the police, so the ending doesn’t make sense either. Try adding more appearances of the villain, and add a little more story.

I hope this helps you out! Good luck to you and your game. (:

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I Understand, That Was My First Obby Though

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Understood, I was giving feedback as requested. I hope my feedback helps you improve, and good luck! (:

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Yes, It Helps Alot Ty For Your FeedBack.

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I would love to test out your game!