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Hi There So I’m Fairly New To Building And I Would Love Some Great Feedback On This

So Take Note Of The Following:

  • I Made Everything You See
  • I Am Just Over A Month Into Building
  • Constructive Criticism Would Be Appreciated.

Also, What Would You Possibly Pay For This Build Of Mine? I Am Very Interested.

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Thanks For Taking The Time To Respond :smiley:

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It’s pretty cool but I have some thoughts about the props and stuff.

  • Waterfall doesn’t match water blue. Keep in mind water fall is going to be slightly lighter because when light passes through water it makes it lighter.

  • Mushrooms maybe should have some dots.

  • The middle island seems to be lacking a similar tree it looks different idk why.

  • The grass on the middle island looks different too.

  • Grass maybe make it no a clump like a bush and vary in size and shape.

  • Bridge to middle island.

Price maybe 500-1K.

Hope this helped, John.

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Thank you i will work on some of these right away

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I like it, a lot actually. You’re improving on your buildings a lot I must say. One thing I must suggest is adding maybe a dock or bridge over the waterway, and a bridge going to the middle of the lake onto that small island. I would pay about 250-300 for this, if not a little less than 300.

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Would This Work For The Mushrooms Or Should I Make The Spots a darker color
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If anything you should make the spots a lighter color.

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Yes but maybe make the spots whiter so you can see them better like Vesteria has.

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OK So I Made Them Lighter. Is This Good Or Is This Too Light
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Is This A Bit Better

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Yeah, but I’d suggest removing the current railings and the brown lines on the wood planks.
Replace the current railings with something similiar to this: image

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Let’s start by saying that it overall looks really nice. There is a good amount of contrast and the colors look really good together. I would tho make the waterfall look more “alive” and add some water color to it. Also you should create a few more types of grass, so it does not look that the grass is always the same. You could add a wooden bridge leading to the middle island that is all made of wooden and without that bad looking railings (also make the wooden look more natural), and maybe add a few torches to offer more light, other than the mushrooms. I would pay maybe 700 :robux: for this as it is now, but making it better could make it become worth 1K-1.3K :robux:. Have a nice day and keep building!

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