Made my first incremental game. Please give feedback

So recently I have started to remake (for now it is just a copy) of an incremental game called Universal Paperclips. This is my first time trying to make a full game - please do not judge any bad designs and/or impracticalities. I want to receive some feedback on how I can improve the game to attract more players.

Also, I am trying to create an actual good quality game, not some cash grab or copy of some other popular games. Anyways, here is the game: https://www.roblox.com/games/99806474563962/Paperclips-Incremental-Tutorial-added. If you want to check out the original game as well for refrence, here it is:
https://www.decisionproblem.com/paperclips/