May I have feedback on my recent commission!

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I’ve recently been working on a commission of mine, Babikú. I would love and accept good/constructive feedback that doesn’t have the intention of sounding offensive and or disrespectful.

The theme of the build is to go for a Japanese/traditional theme with a modern touch to some outputs.
Please note the grey outline is the software I was using to input the watermarks.

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Thank you,
Pouldra.

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I can barely see the build with the horrible watermarks, if you want advice, just have one watermark and make it less visible, they are absolutely horrible, i cannot put enough emphasis on it

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I really like it, Mr. Willy Wonka,

also thats very smart by putting watermarks on your creations,

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I’m sorry? I use them to fur-fill the entire picture because my builds have been stolen ( by photos ) many times. They are there for safety of the build, and will continue to be there.

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Thank you so much for the feedback! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:

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If you look past the watermarks, the build is extremely detailed. It looks really good, and has a nice color pallet, unlike many other cafe games, in which the color pallets have colors that are too similar or way too colorful. I like the backlighting on the sign and the glass looks really good. I really enjoy the industrio-modern lighting. I think it will look even better with future lighting though, as you have put a lot of effort into your unique lighting solutions.

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Is this for a cafe? If so I will go check it out maybe even donate I love Chinese food.

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Thank you for the detailed and well specified feedback. I truly appreciate this type of feedback.

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This is a hibachi place, but the owners have not released it yet. :blue_heart:

OoOh I love hibachi I saw flamingo played a hibachi place is that where you got the idea?

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Holy god…

I love the reflection in the glass

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The water marks make it pretty hard to see but I love the use of the same two colors and lighting but the light on the “B” is too bright

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Thank you so much! :blue_heart:

Took this into consideration, thank you.

No, I believe this group was made 5 months before the video was released. I’m just the builder of the group.

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Ok cool cant wait to check it out!!!:smiley:

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It looks pretty good, there are texture and color differentiations, there are many details and decorations. It’s pretty much realistic and on my opinion it respects the traditional japanese theme.

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