My 6th Graphic Design I've Made! (GFX)

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I’m Aocule and I mostly specialize in clothing design but I am trying to look for another hobby and I chose graphic design. I haven’t really done much in this area and I’ve merely worked on graphic design for about 2 weeks now.

I hope to hear feedback from the community and experienced graphic designers!!
Here’s my 6th ever made graphic design.

TOTAL TIME: 4 HOURS

LIGHTSABER edit
LIGHTSABER edit1080×1080 2.38 MB

Some of you might be curious what my other gfx looked like so I’ll leave it down below:

Past Gfx

BRIGHT SUN
BRIGHT SUN1920×1080 2.19 MB

ninja face front 2
ninja face front 21938×1080 1.17 MB

I hope I improved in your eyes!! Please let me know or give me constructive feedback. I appreciate all!

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You did a great job!!

But the shadow on the face of the first GFX does not look real,
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It looks like a banana and is not straight like the weapon, it also looks like the mouth of the person.

Everything else is fine!!

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I curved it because the roblox avatar heads are in a cylinder type of shape and I’m guessing I should’ve made the shadow from top left to bottom right area. Thanks for the feedback though! :grinning:

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Amazing GFX for a beginner! I like the effects that you’ve added in the GFX. Great job!

Actually the lightsaber that you gave to your character have blue lasers instead of yellow, but it isn’t important anyway lol

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Thank you very much, i appreciate it a lot!

Also yes, originally blue lasers but it didn’t really match xD