My first animation! Any feedback?

Hey everyone! I have made my first official animation! Can you guys help me and give me feedback? Thanks!

https://streamable.com/isaabp

Edit: I made a new one! the new one is R6. https://streamable.com/w9qcyb

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I’m no animator but to me, this is some good stuff. The only issue I see is the LowerTorso not moving which is very jarring. If you fixed that it would be pretty much perfect :+1:!

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Honestly, pretty nice for your first animation but I also agree with @Lostrocket16 that the lower torso needs to move a lot more as that’s the main body part moving everything

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Hmm… Alright! Thanks for you’re feedback!

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Alright. Thanks! Ill try to fix that!

It looks really nice! And yes, sorry to bring it up again, but the torso being stuck in place makes it look like the dummy is just moving around the torso.

Anyways, you’re a very good animator! I like the animation! Keep up the good work!

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It looks great in my opinion, far better than what I can make. I feel like the biggest problem with this is the fact that it’s a bit too fast paced. Other than that, it’s great!

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Alright. Thanks for the feedback!

Hmm Alright, thank you for the feedback! I’ll try to improve it!

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