My first build. Thoughts?

Hey, developers.

This is my first ever real build on Roblox. It’s not impressive by any means and only took me like 15 minutes. Is there anything you can suggest I can do to improve the quality?

Thanks.

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I think that the outside is a bit dull in that it has only one floor visible and that the tower is a bit lackluster in something I can’t describe very well.

If you keep building like this and improving your skills then you definitely have potential for some amazing builds. time will tell.

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You have potential,but how said SuperZebe1 outside is a bit dull.I think you can added flower beds,trees to make the building look beautiful!And the style of the building looks strange to me.But its good!

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Great Build, love the little inside detail!

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I very much agree with everything said. Only thing, is I was planning on adding this to a city, and that’s why the outside detail is lackluster. (It still stands that it needs more detail though)

Just another reference image on something I was making that is apart of the city. I am trying to use neon lights to make it more lively.

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Hello again!I’m like it.But have one question

What a this?

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I would just suggest to change the studio logo.

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Oh,I’m just didn’t seen that its old roblox studio logo

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That’s really cool! My first build could never be as good as that.

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Impressive, considering my first build was a ugly looking box that took 4 hours :laughing:

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Haha, it’s supposed to be a window.

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I’d say change the studio logo. Is there an interior?

Yea, but it’s quite compact (and bad). I was mainly just testing my ability to build the exterior.

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WOAH! Your Really good that’s Better then My first Build! It’s like a Roblox Studio Headquarters I’m Liking the side Part I’m liking this Build I’m giving it an 10 / 10

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something feels familiar…

If you were trying to make it like the ones seen in Jailbreak, then you did a good job!

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