My first build

Hello, my name is Vruae and I’ve been building for about two days. I would like to hear your opinion about my first build, it doesn’t matter if it is negative or postive. My first build is a Merch store. I only used two plugins, F3X and a 3D letter plugin. The only free model I used are clothing mannequins. It took me around 1-2 hours.

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It’s… ok… It looks very bland and featureless. Try to add some unique and stylish embellishments and decorations. It could also use a more robust shape and a better roof.

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Alright, thank you, I will try it

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Cool store, though here are some suggestions:

  1. Try decorating the store with some plants
  2. Build a cash register somewhere to give the store a realistic feel
  3. If possible, you should decorate the roof or put a second floor

Overall, I’d give it an 8/10

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Okay, thank you for the suggestions!

Hey,

Not bad! Once you get the hang of your tools and the capabilities of Roblox Studio, everything from there is pretty easy. It seems you’ve got the basics, now I suggest trying to push yourself a bit and expand your creativity! :hammer_and_wrench:

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Looks good to me. Keep it up :wink:

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Looks good but too many windows and its too flat. apart from that good building and I like the consistency and the use of colours.

Meh it’s OK ish I would add more texture to the the outside but it looks good :+1:

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I recommend that you use blender it is an app to build and to make characters well I use to make my characters :grin:

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that helps you to get good buildings :+1: Hope this can help you

Certain parts of the build looks too flat.

Merch stores always have more unique shapes and roof designs consider using different approaches to have a more natural build. I’m not going to focus on the color scheme since that is still a work in progress and not worth giving feedback on; give parts more details and height the entire build itself. At a first glance, instead of using one single plugins consider finding ones that are needed to make things more easier and quicker.

Experiment with roof designs and shapes in general. Buildings or stores aren’t completed in a few hours, it’ll take time and patience if your wanting a more detailed look. After all it’s a start but still requires more details.

For a first build this is very good :))I suggest adding more detail on the interior, as well as more color design. There are only 3 colors in the entire build.

Not bad on your first build. Keep it up and you’ll improve. :slightly_smiling_face:

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