Hi I tried to make a Building and I think it needs a lot of work what do you think I can improve on
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Hey! Could you take a picture up close since sometimes screenshots appear bad from a far angle? Also the windows could use more details, make it sticking out.
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Looks Great for a first build; great job! To improve, i’d make the white bits on the windowpanes look more like the ones in the picture-the ones to the right look like a tic-tac-toe board! But other than that, great job!
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It’s good for a first building, we don’t always do good the first try. Maybe try using some borders around the windows? The glass can’t just stick out. The door at the bottom seems like it was done by a painting software? Maybe try to improve with the door too. Maybe try to expand into more colors as original building colors IRL aren’t so good to use- But overall, pretty nice with the union touch.
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The model looks good from the screenshot that you’ve given us. There are a few things that need to be modified:
- There are no window borders around the window (as seen form screenshot)
- In the real-life model, the building is skinnier than what you’ve built in Roblox studio. I don’t know if that’s intentional or not.
- The roof could use a little bit of texture
- Make the middle portion of the building pop out more
- Fix your spacing between the windows. The left side of the windows are way too close towards the wall compare to the right side of the windows. And the left side of the window towards center than the right side of the window
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