My first ever build give rate it and give me feedback

My first ever build in Roblox studio rate it and give me your feedback on how I could improve it.




and here is the game if you wanna go check it out:Water fall - Roblox

make sure to have max graphics.

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very pretty landscape!! the only issue i can see is that you’ve made the floor quite flat. consider adding more pebbles and small mounds of dirt. using multiple layers of beams for the waterfall will also add more depth to your scene, making it look more alive. other than that, good job!! tag me in the next thing you make!!

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Looking nice for the first build, I’d recommend to use sounds as well. Such as waterfall sound, water sound, birds sounds etc. Use sunrays as well, it improves the quality and it makes the environment much prettier. But not bad for the first time! Keep up the good work!

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Alright Thank’s for the feedback I will make it more alive and I will tag you next thing I make.

Alright thanks for the feedback i will do that next time I make one.

you should try changing the lighting and shadows. it looks so wrong

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This is astonishing for a first build! Really Awesome work!

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What rock texture did you use? And where did you get it? I’m currently struggling to find high quality textures that fit my needs…

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Thanks I did this under 6 hours so yeah its pretty good.

I use this search up rock and find the texture you want Search | ambientCG

Yeah I am still learning lighting I’m not very good at it yet.

Lighting is kinda difficult getting it perfect, there are a lot of different presets for lightning you can get on google and YouTube videos.

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Yeah it is difficult to get it perfect.

JEEEEZ. This is great for a first build, can’t wait to see your next project!

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