My First Ever Game!

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I just finished my first ever game and would like some feedback to improve it where I can, thanks!
Game: Monitor

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  1. this might just be a personal opinion, but the in-game font doesn’t look that great, i would change it to something more appealing

  2. there should be a limit on how many markers you can place to make the game more challenging

  3. a perfect way to make robux from your game is to make it cost a certain amount to the end the game so either users stay intrigued with the same maze and persevere through it or they give up and buy a new map generation

    aside from the stated, cool game!

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I like it, very creative.

  1. I dont see any threats
    -Why am I going through a maze
    -What challenges can I solve
    -What is making me stay in the game
  2. As max just said, you can crash the game by placing to many markers, so add a limit or a cooldown (I would suggest limit)
  3. Maybe add hits, I cant judge myself, but it was pretty difficult to solve
  4. What if some troll player hits Q while people are trying to play the game, maybe have a vote quit.

This is very good for a first game, I wish you the best of luck going forward!

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Where badges? Badges are nice to have.

So, I suggest maybe something for singleplayer since it was boring and hard for me alone.

It looks good though

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Quick update: Thank you all for the feedback and suggestions, I have made it so quitting is now a voting system, markers (only available in singleplayer) now turn from pink to green to red depending on distance to the closest exit, markers also now have a cap of 300, and I fixed a bug where the halls wouldn’t line up for the monitor and maze runner
I am working on badges, and puzzles to solve before you can exit the maze, I also have the idea of adding more themes, a leaderboard for best times, monetizing the game, and of course adding a tutorial.
Thanks again for all the ideas! And please don’t hesitate to notify me of any and all bugs / glitches!

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I just want to see what the exit door looks like do you mind sending a screenshot?
Game is decent could be better with a monster that would really tie in the horror.

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This is a good game i feel you could improve the lighting a bit also when found the exit nothing happened i touched the white neon and nothing happened

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it took me 23 minutes to find the exit the game is hard to learn without reading the description so i suggest a how to play button that says what the markers do in the how to play menu

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Update time! Added Tutorial (a wall of text for rn), major bug fixes, removed smoke from the map with pipes, sound effects/ambience, (hopefully) fixed bug where game wouldn’t end, new map, and that’s it I think. Thanks all for your help, and I hope to continue and improve! As always, mention any and all bugs/glitches in the replies. Thanks again!

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Wow! The game is great, especially for a first one. It took about 9 minutes to finish. The only thing I noticed was that the timer is missing 0s in some places, like in the picture below it should be

00:06:05

but instead, it shows

0:6:5

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Other than that, Im really impressed! Great job!

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Reduce the vertices of the meshes, more vertices = more the game becomes lag

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I found a few more things:

  • The voting system lets you vote multiple times…
  • When you’re chatting and you say the letter “q” or “t” it fires the inputBegan, that’s a big one
  • Every once in a while I get spawned in a map that has 2 dead ends on either side and is just one hallway for the whole map
  • You need to add a tutorial for the monitor specifically, it took me a while to understand that the player is between the cracks and that the blues are exits.
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Average robloxian’s experience:

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Update! Added detection so player cannot vote twice, typing “q”, “t”, or “e” in chat will no longer cause their actions to happen. Added a line to Monitor section of tutorial. Made clock have more 0’s. Thanks for your continued bug finding!