My first ever GFX!

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This is my first ever GFX!

I need feedback (even if its the littlest thing)

I want to be a GFX designer that does low prices however I cant just start selling my GFX straight away until I make everything perfect!

Made in Blender.

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This is nice for a first! One thing that seems odd to me though.

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  • The legs look like they are deattached from the torso.

  • The position the legs are in looks kinda of iff to me.

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Thanks for the feedback!
Now looking at the at the picture I just cant unsee the torso detached from the legs.
In my next GFX. I will make sure that everything is fully attached.

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I drew all over the image to show you what could be different -

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I’ve circled the sun in the distance to show you that that’s where the light source should be. This is also why I circled the edge of the heart to show that the shadow shouldn’t be there and why I drew the arrow and the question mark because that’s where it looks like the light source is coming from. Also I guess you could change the color of the light source to something more orange or pinkish to match the beach scene.

I circled the feet and the torso because the feet don’t look like they belong on the beach, they kinda look like they’re hovering as well with the position they’re in. The torso was circled because it seems disconnected from the rest of the body.

Over all, this is a really nice GFX. Nice work!

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Thanks I appreciate this! I will definitely bookmark this for my next GFX! :grinning:

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I like the GFX but I feel it looks more like you pasted your ROBLOXian on a stock photo. Consider adding more details to make it more original.

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