Idk why but the hand is pink and head is a bit transparent, that isn’t the case before I rendered it.
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Nice job! Especially this is your first GFX.
My feedback is that near the window the light is too much. I recommend you reduce it.
I’d rate your GFX a 9.5/10 although!
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I almost can’t tell that it’s a GFX. It’s very good! I like the smooth texture of it. The lighting and the background is well done!
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It’s very cartoon-like and it really looks good!
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Just like @Chai_rbf said, hard to tell it’s your first GFX! Can’t criticize on anything, so good job and keep up the good work! 
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Extremely good for a first gfx, however I saw few things that could change.
- I’m not sure if you use a denoiser but I see a tiny bit of noise on the left, not too noticeable but still there.
- The accessories are transparent. There are many threads on the forum to explain how to fix that so don’t worry about that.
Good Gfx so far!
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thanks for your feedback! I’m looking forward into trying your suggestions.
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That’s very detailed and it so cartoony! its a 10/10 for me
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Wow! If that’s your first GFX, you definitely can do well in the future. Maybe using some kind of editing software after to add some more features would be good but other than that, great job!
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The image frames are a bit low. The animations look extremely well-made.
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Thanks so much for all your support!
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Such a nice mix of realism and cartoony! I’d rate it a 10/10. I love the lighting coming in from the window on to the table. Really draws the viewers focus to the character. I love the props too! Very well done. Keep it up.
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I’m going to hit you hard. 
- Lots of noise/grain - turn on demolishing. I don’t know which version of blender your using so I can’t provide you with how, just check YouTube or google.
- The hand looks pink. I’m telling you this though you acknowledged because I know how to fix it. The pink shirt is bouncing off the hand because there is no light near the hand, so just add some light.
- Make the lightbulb bright, you can make the texture an emission. Just check on google how.
Nice job for a first GFX!
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Thanks for the tips! I’m definitely gonna use them on my next GFX
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This is your 1st GFX? Wow! Keep up the good work!
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This looks great, especially for a first! I like the level of detail.
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It is transparent because of the alpha channel. Common beginner’s mistake.
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That is amazing for your first GFX. I see that there is a lot of denoising in some areas. My suggestion is that you lower some of it. Overall, its wonderful for your first GFX, keep it up!
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Are you using denoising data? If not, you should as it will make your picture way less grainy.
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This GFX definitely looks very good! However, I would reduce the lighting on the window a little bit, because the light there is a bit too bright and therefore a little unrealistic.
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