suggestions are appreciated
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The render overall looks pretty good, some text might be nice.
Did you create the background?
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No. The background is temporary.
I plan to use game background instead.
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I would not use the background. For the render it looks pretty good. Would be able to provide better feedback if we knew what background it went with or game.
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@Vayz Amazing! Have you considered working with GFX commissions? I really enjoyed your work did you currently just do this one? I’m looking forward to the next one ;D
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I think that GFX is great! Although we would all definitely be able to evaluate further if you revealed the background you’ll be using.
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What Software did you use to make this?
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Looks cute, love the background choice 
I’d probably go in like R6 Animation then use Bone Rig in either C4D or Blender to make it nicer.
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Roblox Studio with Load Character Plugin
Blender
and paint dot net
So assuming you didn’t make the background, I guess you just want feedback on the render.
Someone suggested the bone rigging thing, which could be an improvement. Otherwise, it’s pretty good, but it seems like it’s kind of overly bright/blown out.
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This is really nice GFX, and I think you did an absolutely great job with it; however, one think that you might want to change is the simple wave of the character. Try to make it seem more realistic by shifting the position of the legs and other arms to look less like a statue. Once again though, good job!
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