My first model feedback please

Im working on this tissue paper model Feedback is highly appreciated since Im new.



Screenshot 2020-11-30 at 3.16.04 PM Updated
Its on SketchUp for Schools.

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I hope you like it because I was inspired to do this thanks to @IProgramForFun Thank you! @IProgramForFun and hope your game gets succesful :slight_smile:
And it took me 20 minutes to do it.

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Looks really good! I am not a very experienced modeler, so I think you’ll probably not get as good feedback from me, but I do really like it. Maybe make it so there is a tear line like where the sheets separate, that would be a fun detail!

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ok thanks Ill update it right away! :slight_smile:

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It looks good, but it’s very simple. Try challenging yourself.

It looks good, but it would be better if:

  • The hole was symmetrical.
  • There was a holder for it.
  • Maybe a stray piece coming off the side.
  • Some simple context i.e. a countertop that it’s sitting on.

Quick model (ignore the messy edges) to show you what I mean:

Also, I would recommend using Studio or another program SketchUp (for me at least) seems to require lots of effort for minimal results.

Uhh…okay then I guess I’ll have to model on roblox studio
Btw scetchup is so easy that’s why.