This is my first music video
(I’m really bad at writing story)
I made this in 30min with no help
To me, roblox music vids are a little bit cringe. I will try to be unbiased.
It’s ok… There are a million cuts and it’s hard to tell whats going on or why everyone is fighting.
Roblox definitely wouldn’t allow this for several reasons. The cutthroat animation, the blood, the copyrighted music and violence.
There is quite a lot of sway with the video and it’s really distracting.
You should try a different location because this is in the middle of a pretty empty looking desert and the background looks empty.
I would suggest capitalizing the i’s in your scripts and try a better background story, it went from talking about needing a job to two random people in SUITS in a desert trying to murder 2 fellas.
I hope this helped
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i dont want to make music videos, but i dont have idea for animation.
You should do commissions for other people and get a feel there. This will help you learn your trade more as well
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To try and be completely unbiased as well here, If you’re starting off with animations, I think this is a good way to do it. However, just like luxorz said above… there are way too many cuts and it’s just hard to tell whats going on after that. Besides that aspect, I think your music video is unique. Keep working hard and you’ll exceed your expectations man!
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