My game is not really a game

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#1

So I have a game I’m working on, it’s not much. It doesn’t have any gameplay loops or really anything to keep a player playing. I’m hoping someone could help me with ideas for gameplay loops…
(3) TreeCity - Roblox
Thats the game, tell me what I could do to it to make it an actual game that I would want to play, I’m up for anything

#2

Here are some things:

  1. Description is too short and doesn’t tell much about the game.
  2. The icon is too basic. Don’t just slap text into a screenshot and call it GFX.
  3. Use of free models.
  4. Lack of optimization.
  5. No tutorial.
  6. There isn’t much to do in the game, I suggest adding quests, whatever of a game you’re aiming for.
  7. Lack of coding. Most of this game is just default Roblox Instances, like Dialog.