My Roblox art Feedback

hmm, do you think this picture is good?
I tried again using Pixellab, and this time the result is different from my first Roblox art which I also made in Pixellab


Pretty good art. My only recommendations are to make the line work look cleaner, and remove the hazy parts.

Looks pretty decent, the lineart’s a bit messy and should be cleaner, and that should make it look a bit better. Nice job!

Try drawing lines in one stroke, and I’d recommend erasing the blurred parts on the outside of the lines. Otherwise, cool drawing!

Would rate it 8.5/10 because line art is a bit messy other than that great job!

Looks cool! I like it. the background effect is very cool!

but! messy lines were his trademark