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Why is he holding an AR with one hand? His pose is very unnatural. The place that he is in does not make sense, as he is backed into a wall waiting… for something. The AR seems very small, and the pistol looks like he is aiming at his foot. The camera angle hurts my eyes a little bit too.
Overall, I think it needs some work. However, because this is your second, it is pretty good!
Have a good day 