My very first story game!

Hey guys! New developer here! I just released my very first big game! It’s my first time making a story game and I think it turned out great! I’ve been working on this game for 3 months! Well, hopefully, you guys will like it! Please respect, thank you! Enjoy the game!

THE HOLY ISLAND [STORY]

For feedback/bug reports, you can comment here or you can DM me on discord! Thomasssssss#8084

credits to @GB_Sloth for the terrain design.
@Ponchokings

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Hello!
For trying to do a good quality feedback i played you’r game and writed all the bad point for helping you to fix all of that!

  • No way to mute the music in hte lobby
  • The camera moov in the beginning are too fast
  • The UI don’t look that good
  • The music is only in the lobby (not on the game)
  • The gamepass are too visible
  • Too many coins in a little area (In the spawn)
  • No blue trails at the beginning??
  • Too many meteor
  • Taking damage during animations
  • Too much blur sometimes for no reason
  • The text look too basic
  • The game is too hard at the beginning
  • It’s hard to understand the story (because the game is too fast)
  • It jump after every transition for no reason
  • The sound are too loud
  • Why we get ultra speed during boss fight ??
  • The player don’t really look scared (in the Story)
  • The apple only regen 1 HP
  • Too many transitions
  • You loose HP for no reason when you touch some object
  • We find a crowbar and a hammer in a jail, why, i mean, how it’s possible?
  • The obby is hard
    And i sadly died, and i’v not the time to play again, sorry about that.

Anyway, it’s a cool game, just the story is a little bit basic.
Good work, hope you will change all of that !

Have a good day!

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Thank you so much for your honest feedback! It’s actually my first time, and I’m trying to make it original. And yeah! I’m trying to save my robux to hire a UI designer cause I don’t really like designing GUIs, lol. I’ll try my best to improve everything that you’ve listed!

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Oh if you need a UI designer it can be a pleasure to make you one for free.

My Discord : Manda#9819
Twitter : NacosDnz

Hope you will accept !

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