The home-store is really nice overall, but you can improve on it…
1.) Use a texture for the floor, you can find some textures in toolbox.
2.) Change the stools to smooth plastic, because who in the world would want to sit on a concrete stool. Lol.
3.) Put the most time played sign where people are going to see it, I would put it on a frontal wall from spawning instead if it were me.
4.) For the vending machine, maybe make some soda cans in Blender. Or get the Bloxy Cola from the gear catalog, because the drinks/cans that are in there look bland.
5.) After staying in the game for a while, I found that the same soundtrack keeps playing. I would recommend adding more soundtracks. Although the one sounds nice by itself, its always nice to have more.
6.) If this is an ATM, it seems way to tall for a ROBLOX Avatar.
7.) Maybe add a mannequin at the outdoor bar, for decoration.
8.) If that is a garage door, I would recommend making it metal. Because I have never seen a garage door made of concrete, but that is just my opinion.
9.) For the mannequins/rigs or whatever you want to call them, I would have the Co-Founder and or the Founder mannequin say something like “Welcome to (home-store name goes here) don’t forget to join the group!” Or, “Like what you see, then join the group!” -But those are just examples
10.) And to conclude this long post, I think the build just needs to be improved and revamped overall, with textures and more decoration.
-Hope this feedback helps!