Need feedback on my SECOND ROBLOX GFX

Hello, I made today in 2 hours my second ad. I need some feedback what I do wrong or what I can do better.

(Sorry for the quality in my .png its alright.)


Nice GFX :+1:

My advise is to maybe change it from “Become a security” to “Become security” and also the robloxian in the GFX is hard to see so maybe more lighter colours on some parts.

Overall, really good job on this!