Need Help With My Game (FEEDBACK)

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I am currently working on my first real game, and needed others to help me by giving feedback as to what I can improve on, add, remove, etc.

This game is going to be one of those “Find the _____” games.

Game link: generic searching game - Roblox

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Hey. The blocky style of the game is really nice as well with that one smooth portal. (I believe that there are 5 of them, but only one is working so far.)

But those are only things to do there. It’s kinda boring after 2 minutes of gameplay.

I recommend doing music on/off button and add music, making more portals. (The first one was blue, so you could make green, pink, orange etc.)

I hope this helps a bit.

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Don’t want to sound rude but there’s literally nothing to go off of. It was literally just an empty lobby with a blue teleporter that teleported you to an even more empty blue island in which trying to teleport back from didn’t work. As for the gameplay, there was none. I’ll just keep it at that.

You should add some form of gameplay before asking for feedback. Maybe I’m wrong though, there was a glowing green rock on the blue island that may have done something. For now I’m just assuming it did nothing

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uhh the game is unrated you should probably add the questionnaire so that players under 13 can play

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Yeah, currently there’s literally nothing to go off of because I haven’t finished making the maps. The icy part of the game doesn’t do anything currently because I haven’t made game play for it. You’re right, of course, I’ll probably repost this a few days later after I’ve made a significant amount of progress. Thank you!

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Gotcha. I’ll do that some time soon

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The other teleporters that are white do not work currently because I have not given them a map to teleport to. The only map that is close to being finished is the icy one with the blue teleporter. Each of the teleporters will have a different color once the map is close to being finished. I’ll make the music button, and adding more portals soon. They will be around the lobby. Thank you!

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