Need some advice/criticism on my spaceship

I’ve been working on this off and on for a while now, and I’m not sure I like how it’s turning out… =/

I’ve never really built spaceships of my own before (only based off of Lego models), and so far, I’m not really liking how the hull is turning out. I’m thinking it might look better if it were elongated. Also, the rear portion past the fuel tanks needs a decrease in detail (I started the back first, and didn’t realize how many parts it was going to end up being; I had to decrease overall hull detail because I wanted to focus on the interior.)

But what do you guys think?

Edit: I’ve uploaded my progress here.

If you could make the bridge (or viewing are up front, whatever you want to call it) more hexagon-shaped so it sticks out past the sides of the ship some, I think that might help fill out the shape more.

But it looks pretty dang good, otherwise.

You planning on coloring it?

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You planning on coloring it? [/quote]

I wasn’t really planning on it. I generally prefer grey ships, but now that I think about it, it might look good with some highlights.

My response to this piece of beauty:

I’m redoing a roblox space series [Roblox Space Stories] I’m looking for ships is there a way we could make some sort of deal or something so I could film some scenes with it?

That really depends on whether or not I finish it. I’ve been limited on time lately, and like I said, I’m not sure I like the way it’s turning out so far.

That really depends on whether or not I finish it. I’ve been limited on time lately, and like I said, I’m not sure I like the way it’s turning out so far.[/quote]

The style is exactly what I am going for. It is magnificent :slight_smile:

I don’t know, it sure has a lack of space for a spaceship.

When I saw your name, Beta2, I knew that it would be incredibly beautiful. I was not disappointed.
There’s nothing that could be better, it’s a work of art.

Are these… your drawings?

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They’re filtered rendered images. I smell paint.net, mmmm.

[quote] Are these… your drawings?



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They’re filtered rendered images. I smell paint.net, mmmm.[/quote]

Yup. Paint.net all the way. =P

I would have uploaded some of my actual sketches, but I’m lacking in the scanner department.

Regardless, your work is a masterpiece.
Only thing I want in your game is noclip, so I can fly around inside the spaceships.

Sweet, I’ve been trying to find someone to start a roblox side project with me. If anyone’s ever played Star Wars Battlefront 2 space conquest(I think that’s what it was called) you should totally add me on skype :slight_smile: same name