New 2D art! What do you think?

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#1

Hi everyone :smile: ! I’ve recently made a few sketches and would love to hear your critiques and opinions, hope you enjoy them.

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#2

I loveee your style absolutely adorable but some small things are working more on proportions and angles! From your first images looks quite odd the way her angle is and how it’s proportioned out with the neck. Same goes with the second image it looks as though the neck is very wide compared to the half body. Possibly move the mouth down a bit as well. if you do commissions id love to commission you sometime splendid work, I’m excited to see more work from you! <3

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#3

Looks really nice, but like what @strawiko said, some small things like the proportions are a bit off. In my opinion, their mouth is a bit too high. Their eyes are in a good spot, and I guess their nose is as well.

For Character 1, I feel like it’s pretty nice overall. There are some spots I would suggest fixing, like some wobbly line art, but other than that Character 1 is good.

For Character 2, I feel like their goggles don’t match with her outfit. The goggles look like something a diver or skier would wear, and their outfit looks like something you would wear at night in bed. You could try matching their outfit with their accessories, of which I would recommend the most. Same as Character 1, some of the line art look a bit wobbly and shaky, but it doesn’t ruin the image.
Another thing is that Character 2s neck is very long, considering the length of their chest and width of their shoulders. Their neck should be a bit shorter.

A consideration I would have for you is to shade a bit more. I see shading in both characters neck region, and some in their clothing, but that is about it. Try shading near their nose and bangs, it would most likely make your art look a bit better.

Overall your drawings are very good in my opinion, honestly one of the best I’ve seen on the Developer forum. Good job to you.

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#4

Thank you so much for the feedback. I’ll take note of it :relaxed:

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#5

Thank you for your lovely feedback haha. I definitely agree with your opinions on the second sketch! Although the goggles were a signature part of its character design so i had to add it :sweat_smile: I was a bit lazy with the clothes I guess.

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