New music piece! Please critique!

Im not sure. I kind of just did this for fun. Any critique?

Bit of a headphones warning its electric guitar so its loud.

make the sound more defined but not too sharp

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Thanks! I will fix that. Can you be a bit more specific?

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i cant hear the notes well enough i dont know much about music i dont know what its called

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Ahhh yeah ill fix that rq UwU :grinning:

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